Re: Unseen: Vanish (Need more people)

by **Cali** Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:31 pm

Kiledude wrote:"No intentions to kill you." He joked. "Just stay calm and you'll be fine." He looked at the teacher waiting for her to go in the class. "You should go." He smiled.

(Btw I wanna do a second version of this, starting here but from Kyle's view )

Alice smiled at Kyle and surprisingly gave him a hug, "Thanks, Kyle. For everything." she pulled away, gave him one of her signiture smiles, and went to class. She took her seat in the front row, just as the bell rang.

by **Freedom_Elite** Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:44 pm

Kyle left after she went to her class and began to run for his own. Walking would make him late because it was on the other side of the school compared to Alice's class, but he would never tell her that.

by **Cali** Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:56 pm

(should we skip to the part where alice gets beaten?)

by **Freedom_Elite** Fri Apr 01, 2011 4:57 pm

(Up to you Very Happy

, right now your in control of the story lol.)

by **Cali** Fri Apr 01, 2011 5:17 pm

(hhmmm humina (muaahah) i guess so.. alright ill post it later. im in class)

by **Freedom_Elite** Fri Apr 01, 2011 5:19 pm

(Otay

be a good girl and focus in school Razz

lol. Have fun Very Happy

)

by **Cali** Fri Apr 01, 2011 6:55 pm

(XD its just my creative writing class. xD)
The deafening bell rang and she stood up from her chair while lifting her backpack onto the desk, placing the book and her notepad inside one of the small pouches of her backpack. She zipped up the pouch, slid her arm through the S-shaped strap and walked through the door, everyone already going to lunch. She walked to her locker and put in the locker combination. She had blinked and stiffened feeling a rough and cold hand clasped around her shoulder and had turned around. She had froze up as she saw Matt, Nate, Sawyer, and Chris.

Matt was the first to speak up, "What's wrong Ali? Cat got your tongue?" The other boys had laughed silently, standing behind Matt.

She didn't back up, "Do not call me that," she snarled, hate in her eyes. He had grabbed the front of her white dress and slammed her against her locker, causing her to whimper, shaking.

"Don't test me, Allison," he had growled the others chuckling.

"I-I'm not!" She had shouted then cried out as his fist slammed into her stomach. She had fallen to her knees, coughing violently. The others didn't stop chuckling, Matt grinning triumphantly. Matt had then pinned her to the ground and started to punch her over and over.

Chris quickly pulled him off her and had said, "We don't wanna kill her, remember? We only wanted to play with her..." Matt nodded and looked at her, his look making her absolutely terrified. He got on top of her, pinning her down and started to punch her and scratch her with a pair of scissors, slicing her dress and making blood spurt out of her nose and mouth...

After 25 minutes of pain and torture, he finally had gotten off of her, as if he was satisfied. He nodded at Sawyer and Sawyer then started to kick her in the stomach and sides and chest. After a moment he stopped and she got onto her hands and knees. He kicked her in the chin and she fell onto her back...

by **Freedom_Elite** Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:27 pm

Kyle left his classroom quickly and went to the lunch room as the bell rang. 2 kids were already standing at the table he normally sat at. He walked up to them and they all greeted each other, then the other 2 went to get lunch while Kyle sat down to wait for Alice. Another girl came to the table and greeted him with a quick 2 second hug that he didn't return. She ran off to catch up with the other 2 guys. The 3 that had left came back, the girl was holding one of their hands. Kyle looked fairly annoyed around her. After about 10 minutes Alice still hadn't arrived at the cafe so he got up and left to find her. The other 3 followed him, most of it without saying a word to him, but they had a conversation amongst each other. Finally walking around the corner Kyle found Alice laying on the ground and the other 4 kids standing around her. Kyle immediately got ready for a fight, as did the other 2 guys that were with him, but the girl of the group went back around the corner. The 3 started running towards where the 4 kids were.

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 12:12 am

Alice coughed and whimpered, fading in and out of consciousness. Faintly, she saw Kyle and two others, she couldn't see them well. "Oh shit!" she heard Nate yell then the sound of footsteps pounding and getting quieter and quieter. She tried to get up and could have succeeded if it wasn't for the blood loss. She cried out as she fell back down.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:13 am

Kyle and the 2 guys followed the group running from them, and the girl that was with them came back around the corner and rushed over to Alice. "Alice, Alice. Your alright right?" She begged not knowing what she could do other then get the nurse.

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:15 am

Alice coughed up blood, shakily rising to her hands and knees. The sounds of bones cracking were heard as her arm gave out. She screamed in pain, tears flowing down her cheeks. Her dress was torn and bloodstained.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:22 am

"Oh my god Alice, please, just stay here don't move." The girl ran as fast as she could towards the nearest classroom and opened the door.

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:31 am

Alice writhed in pain, crying and screaming as the pain throbbed throughout her body. Whimpering she tried to move again, but it was no use. She had never seen so much blood before, she almost didn't believe it was hers. Everything was fading to black, she could only get a few words out. "I'm sorry I wasn't strong enough."

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:35 am

The teacher came out and before the girl even said anything he saw Alice and ran over to her, and the girl ran to the nurse. Kyle rounded the corner running to get back to her. "Alice!" He yelled right before he noticed the teacher. He stopped running and whispered to himself, "Please be okay."

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:45 am

Alice whimpered as she woke up hours later. The room's light was practically bliding and everything was still throbbing.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:44 am

(Blank post?)

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:09 am

(even tho shes at a hospital? o.o)

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:53 am

(Idk if it's still the memory or if she wake up in real time : P. It's hard to say you wake up in hospital when your suffering from memory attacks. Razz

)

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:33 am

(i was tthinking that she woke up in the hospital after she got her ass kicked but ehh)

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:35 am

(So it's still the memory?)

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:46 am

(i was gonna say yes but noww i am wondering whether i would have alice wake up after this memory or not)

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:49 am

(Humina Humina Xp, your still in control of the storyline for now so up to you Very Happy

, I've been working on a storyline for when you run out of ideas for it buh you know how bad I am at that Xp)

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:59 am

(not even! anyways give it a shot because im running out of ideas too. also cause im short on time. im going to a concert. but anyways ya)

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 12:03 pm

(Lol I have to go for a little while, but here's the start off I guess)

Lillian elves filled the room, and there was also 1 hooded drake elf. The hooded elf was sitting on a chair on the side of the room. Next to him was a little girl, who appeared to be of no relation to the elvish tribes.

by **Cali** Sat Apr 02, 2011 3:47 pm

(mehehe blank post xD >.<)

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:00 pm

"Leave." Kyle's voice came from the hooded elf. The Lillian elves began to leave the room.
The little girl stood up and walked over to Alice, "Are you feeling better?" Her voice didn't sound familiar at all. Kyle simply remained at the bench with his hood up.

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