Re: Good Evening Gentleman's club :3~!

by Vcheese Tue May 25, 2010 12:02 am

hi hi?

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 4:37 pm

hi hi v-chan :3!~

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 6:01 pm

Noah : i got a text from Henry just as i had finished panting out the shadowy parts of Jake's picture. I hadn't noticed it was a little girl until i started on the shape of the face. Round with innocence, skin blemish free and a smile that would bring warmth to any cold heart. I smiled, not texting back yet but just admiring the girl. Who was she? She didn't really resemble Jake...but then again..

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 6:37 pm

Hi guys, sorry I haven't been on in a while, what'd I miss?

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 6:54 pm

its okay and henry and chase are in the limo while noah went looking for matts phone but found jake who needed her to draw a portrait of his sister for him

by Sykora Tue May 25, 2010 7:26 pm

Yep yep!

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 7:31 pm

hi hi nii :3

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 7:37 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:its okay and henry and chase are in the limo while noah went looking for matts phone but found jake who needed her to draw a portrait of his sister for him

Right! so...what should I do?

And random question:
Do you guys actually care whether or not I keep my book up on inkpop?
I mean, I put it up there so other people could read it for the story and all i'm getting are people who only comment on the grammar and all that crap.
I put it up there so people could enjoy it for the story (and don't give me the 'bad grammar distracts from a good story' crap, I know plenty of people who enjoy my work regardless of it's horrendous grammar.) and perhaps expand my audience. But it's not working out like i'd hoped.
So do you guys really care if I leave it up or not? If you don't then I'll just take it off and spare it from it's slow and painful death on the forums.

Thanks!

by Sykora Tue May 25, 2010 7:50 pm

(OOC: AH your story? I haven't heard of it/read it! Linkage!
And I care, because every story is amazing, no matter what kind of grammar or spelling errors it has. Really, a story is a story.

Grammar nazi's scare me, anyway, haha. xD

And, *waves*)

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 7:58 pm

Sykora wrote:(OOC: AH your story? I haven't heard of it/read it! Linkage!
And I care, because every story is amazing, no matter what kind of grammar or spelling errors it has. Really, a story is a story.

Grammar nazi's scare me, anyway, haha. xD

And, *waves*)

Sure thing, it's right here.
http://inkpop.com/projects/23054/whispers-in-the-dark/

but the thing is, people on inkpop are too practical now.
They care more about their works being published and whatnot and have stopped caring about the work.
I'll just hear the same thing over and over on the story, but then the focus comes down to the grammar or something else like that. They hardly read past the first few chapters, but really what story can be accurately judged by the first few chapters?
A book, maybe, but a story can't ever be accurately judged until you get to the end.

If you enjoy it, please let me know.
If you plan on reading further and want me to keep updating it, please let me know.

Oh, and hi ^^

by Sykora Tue May 25, 2010 8:06 pm

(OOC: Awesome, I will start reading it in a few minutes! Very Happy

Yeah, exactly. My whole theory of writing is that "It has to come from the heart". You can't write "just because you want to be published" and you most certainly can't write something by keeping others interests/ideas in mind. A book should just.....flow out of your head when your writing it, at least, that's what I think. People these days -are- too critical!)

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:07 pm

thats what i was going to ask matt-oppa >.< lol

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 8:09 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:thats what i was going to ask matt-oppa >.< lol

Sorry if this seems dense but, Ask me what now?

and hi gabby! ^^

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:10 pm

ask you all if i should keep my stories lol

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 8:19 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:ask you all if i should keep my stories lol

you keep taking them off and putting new one's on.
What's happening to the old stories you had? I wanted to show Region of Tears to a friend of mine.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:21 pm

oh i can put it on public now if you like o-o

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:26 pm

now its up :3

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 8:31 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:now its up :3

Oh cool, thanks.

Sooo, what should I do now with Matt?

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:32 pm

i'm not sure o-o matt told noah to get his phone and then the boys went to the limo >.<

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 8:35 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:i'm not sure o-o matt told noah to get his phone and then the boys went to the limo >.<

Should I just wait until the party then, or Noah gets the phone (if she ever doesXP)

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:38 pm

matt can always wake in on noah painting. she does have matts phone :3

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 8:44 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:matt can always wake in on noah painting. she does have matts phone :3

Okay, let's go with that =)

Matt: "Hey Noah, did you find my pho-. Oh! What's going on here?"

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:48 pm

Noah : it was called knocking..yes..i really do think that's what it was called. I gasped anyway though and blushed. The paint was probably all over my face because i had a bad habit of wiping it off my wrists with my cheeks. "Hi matt" i said, calmly.

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 8:55 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:Noah : it was called knocking..yes..i really do think that's what it was called. I gasped anyway though and blushed. The paint was probably all over my face because i had a bad habit of wiping it off my wrists with my cheeks. "Hi matt" i said, calmly.

Matt: "Uh, Hey Noah," She looked a little pissed when I ran into the room. I just wanted to get my phone from her, Ibut I could apparently see I had burst in on something.
"Can I get my phone now please?" the words came sheepishly out of my mouth.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Tue May 25, 2010 8:58 pm

Noah : I guess i must have looked pissed at matt but i really wasn't. i nodded and gestured to the table besides him. "It's right there. Sorry i was going to hand it back to you but i kinda got.... side tracked" i said, just as my phone rang with another text message belonging to Henry. "I think he wants you to get to the limo" i continued, looking back up at Matt.

by Shadows Tue May 25, 2010 9:03 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:Noah : I guess i must have looked pissed at matt but i really wasn't. i nodded and gestured to the table besides him. "It's right there. Sorry i was going to hand it back to you but i kinda got.... side tracked" i said, just as my phone rang with another text message belonging to Henry. "I think he wants you to get to the limo" i continued, looking back up at Matt.

Matt: I quickly glanced down to my phone, then quickly around the room. Noah was standing in front of...an eisle? Painting? She was painting? Okay, well...I was curious to see what she was painting, but knowing how annoying it was when people looked over your shoulder. So I swiped the phone off the desk and quickly made my way out of the room.
"Thanks," and with a quick salute, I closed the door behind me and made my way down to the front yard.

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