Re: Unseen: Vanish (Need more people)

by **Cali** Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:49 am

(bumpifyness)

by **Freedom_Elite** Wed Mar 02, 2011 6:44 am

(sigh can you do a 2nd post, I for some reason can't make a post out of that : /...)

by **Cali** Wed Mar 02, 2011 10:37 am

(Not a problem ^^)

Alice: Clutching my head in agony, tears ran out of my eyes as blood started to trickle out of my nose. Images ran through my retinas; fire, blood, a burnt forest. I couldn't understand what they meant. Shaking my head, I whimpered, "Make them stop. Oh god, please make them stop!" I doubled over, clutching my head tighter. My breathing became harsh and my heart pounded painfully in my chest. It felt like I was being run over by one mile long train and I was able to feel all of it.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Mar 05, 2011 10:02 am

We had begun to draw alot of attention and finally one of the doctors started walking over.

by **Cali** Sat Mar 05, 2011 3:10 pm

"Help me," I found myself pleading, tears sliding out of my eyes harder. Fire flashed and faces that were transparent floated in front of me. I wanted to scream but I willed myself not to. Suddenly, it was as if I out of my body while I passed out.

by **Cali** Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:41 pm

(bump)

by **Freedom_Elite** Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:45 pm

(Sigh give me like a day or 2 to try to get a new storyline for this one. I'm really on a blank : /)

by **Cali** Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:49 pm

(alrighty)

by **Cali** Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:50 am

(i'm just gonna post what she's seeing in her out of body experience thingy)

Alice: Looking around, I found myself in a clearing. Everything was green and beautiful but I felt as if something dark was watching me. A few people jumped out from the trees surrounding me and I felt my senses go onto over drive but they weren't looking at me. I found my body moving on its own, my hands making symbols that made no sense to me but I seemed so familiar with them. My mouth opened and words in an ancient language poured out in a strong voice that was not mine.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Mar 13, 2011 10:08 pm

(Humina continue if you have more, This may give me somewhat of an idea for the storyline Very Happy

)

by **Cali** Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:26 pm

Alice: I felt hands grip my neck and I couldn't breathe. MY palms opened and darkness surrounded my hands. SUddenly, the scene changed and it was the day I told Kyle I hated him. I saw it all, the hurt in his eyes, the stiffness of his body as he walked away without a word. I found tears running down my face, he wouldn't forgive me. Once he remembers, he wouldn't and I wouldn't blame him. "I'm sorry, Kyle. I am so sorry. Please, forgive me. I was just upset. I didn't mean it. I don't hate you. I never have and never will." I promised him, wondering if he could hear me.

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:44 pm

(Humina I has a question, buh don't wan ask it on the story thread can you Message me on FB or PM me?)

by **Cali** Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:31 pm

(mmmkkkkk)

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:39 pm

(-For Referance. The story is going to be played in Alice's dream for a little while : D)

by **Cali** Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:51 pm

(Fo sho!! It'll be in italics which'll represent the fact that it's a dream/memory thingy ^.^)

The brunette walked into the classroom, her hair tied up into a ponytail by a single red ribbon. Her big green eyes were focused on the ground as she went from heel to toe, back and forth. "Class, this is Alice. She's new around here. Tell us something about yourself," the female teacher said in a motherly tone, knowing the history of the young girl and how she lost her mother when she was born.

"I...I like to draw...and I like music," the ten year old said softly in a shy voice.

A couple kids in the back snickered and she whimpered so softly that only the teacher could hear. The teacher, Ms. Metzner, shot a glare to the four boys who instantly looked away.

Alice looked up to Ms. Metzner with her wide green eyes. "Where do I sit?" she asked politely, still shuffling from foot to foot. The middle aged woman smiled down at her and said, "You can sit right behind Kyle. Kyle will you raise your hand, please?" Alice looked down again, not knowing how this day will turn out.

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:16 pm

A boy in the second row held his hand up. He had a sweatshirt on and dressed otherwise as if from a well up family. He wore 2 necklaces, one had a wolf pendant and the other had a dragon, and the way he wore them seemed as though they were merged to 1 pendant.

by **Cali** Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:20 pm

Alice silently walked to her seat behind the boy Ms. Metzner called Kyle. Upon sitting down, she placed her hands in her lap, keeping her head down. Her cheeks were pink, all eyes were on the new girl. Even though she was ten, her mind was more the one of a seven year old. She hadn't gone to school till that day.

She then silently took out her drawing pad and pencil, pink with the name Alice inscripted in silver cursive, and opened to the drawing of a girl with wings. The girl looked like an older version of herself.

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:36 pm

"You draw very well." Kyle had turned around. As the teacher was talking.

by **Cali** Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:38 pm

Alice looked up and blushed before smiling. "Really?" she asked shyly. No one had commented on her drawings before. Not even her dad. She frowned at the thought. Then she smiled back up at Kyle. "Thanks...I'm Alice," she said softly and quietly so neither of them would get in trouble. The shy little girl went back to shading in the wings carefully. Suddenly, something hit her on the back of the head. She turned around and saw a rolled up piece of paper, sitting on the empty desk. She took the paper and opened it. In chicken-scratch was You'll never be accepted, weirdo. Alice felt tears stinging iin her eyes. She sniffled before seeing the tears fall onto the picture. The drops of sadnss ran down the page, making the ink and pencil run. This made her feel like a failure. WHy? She didn't know.

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Mar 15, 2011 6:32 am

Kyle raised his hand. When the teacher called on him he asked, "Perhaps I should show Alice around the school a little bit?"

by **Cali** Tue Mar 15, 2011 10:50 am

Ms. Metzner smiled gratefully at Kyle and nodded. "I think that's an amazing idea, Kyle," she said as she then shot glares to the four in the back. "You four, see me after class. Got it?" A bunch of kids 'Oooooh'ed and snickered. Alice just stared at her ruined picture, the tears still falling down her face. Without a word, she closed her drawing pad and placed both of her hands in her lap.

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:19 pm

"Come on." Kyle said to the girl. "Bring your drawings please?" He stood up holding his hand out to help her up.

by **Cali** Tue Mar 15, 2011 6:38 pm

Alice looked up at him with her wide green eyes, surprised. But she nodded shyly and took out her drawing bad. She gently and shyly took his hand, avoiding his eyes and the other kids' eyes also.

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:24 pm

Kyle gently pulled at her arm so she would know where to come, without having to look at the other kids. He could tell she felt un-welcome.

by **Cali** Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:29 pm

The young girl kept her head down as she followed the boy. Was this normal in school? she wondered as the tears still fell. Her small hands gripped the drawing pad close to her heart.

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:02 pm

"Don't let them bother you." Kyle told her, 2 of the guardians passed by staring at us slightly. They kept their guns held at ease though so there was no real reason to worry. The school had gone to lockdown about 2 days ago and the guardians were in place to make sure no one tried to rise up again.

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