Re: ♣Kuroshitsuji./Black Butler/.♠

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

And i quote "I don't think writing is your calling...i find that you lack absolutely all emotion in your story and i don't really care for your characters"

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

gah sorry if it got boring with sebbys death now >.<

[lily "the author" hanna]

are you serious???
well then!
i should go and write a very very honest comment on something of theirs. i have a knack of being too honest i've had complaints about that.

some one told me that i don't know good writing because i'm stuck up and suck at writing x.x it was really sad
i didn't write for a few weeks.

[lily "the author" hanna]

um, i guess i could have Salice go over and try comforting him :3

[Shadows]

that was really well written...i could imagine it....really reminded me of godchild

Nadi: I watched the scene with apathetic eyes. Death and denial. I'd seen it countless times before. Well, it showed he cared for this guy, his butler. I would've loved to see some denial against my death. At least someone would've cared. I folded my arms and looked back down at the body. He looked very much murdered. I wonder who did it?

(Well done, gabby, well done.)

Edward: I stood at a distance, beneath the shade of an oak tree. I'd watched as Ciel gripped Sebastians corpse...like a child would if his father were murdered...I heard him cry orders at Sebastian...
I've known many people who'd died...seen scenes just like this. I looked off to the side, away from the others...and saw a face I'd seen all too often...an entity in a black robe, face hidden, standing beside another familiar face. Sebastian.
I'd known Death as long as I could remember. I'd watch many times as he escorted souls across the mortal plane. They both stared on at the scene. Sebastian had a forlorne look in his eye, fixed on Ciel...He looked on with regret, but understanding, as many of the dead had done.
Death put a hand on his shoulder, and turned him away. It was time to go. They both gave me one last look, and I nodded back at them. Then they were gone.

(That okay gabby?)

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

yeah i wanted to stop writing but i guess the person has a point- sometimes or more than sometimes i feel like i do very much lack emotion >.<

and chur not stuck up lilly-maknae o-o chur funny and funny people are not stuck up..unless chur ally...or dimi...but thats normal for them x3

and you guys can do what you want ^-^ now theres no rules cus sebby is dead...oh that so sad o-o"

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

yup thats fine :3

[Shadows]

yeah i wanted to stop writing but i guess the person has a point- sometimes or more than sometimes i feel like i do very much lack emotion >.<

and chur not stuck up lilly-maknae o-o chur funny and funny people are not stuck up..unless chur ally...or dimi...but thats normal for them x3

and you guys can do what you want ^-^ now theres no rules cus sebby is dead...oh that so sad o-o"

You've got an awesome knack for writin' Gabby. I've seen much worse writing (BROTHER! MWAHAHAHA XD...that was mean <.<) but you've got this flair for it that not everyone has.

[lily "the author" hanna]

argh! now i want Salice to bring him back -_- i miss him too much! -sniffles-
ok, let us see what i can do...


Salice: I walk over to Ciel, a little unsure of what to say. I try remembering things humans would say to each other when they mourned...
"Ciel?" I place a careful hand on his shoulder.

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

Ciel : I turn away from Finny and Bard and over to Salice. " Yes?.." Why does my voice sound so far away....why was it so cold so suddenly. I look back down at my bare legs, covered in his blood...its so cold....

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

lol thank chu matt-oppa v.v that was of nice of chu ;3 but i have my very very bad days

[lily "the author" hanna]

thanks ^^i am pretty funny, aren't i? lol
yeah, i mean, some people insist on using all caps all the time :3 like, this is something i read once:
"YOU IDIOT!!!! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THAT?!? OH RIGHT, YOU DIDNT!!!"
i was like, "whoa. calm down...i think lower case and a single ending exclamation/question mark will get your point across."
they yelled at lily -_- it scared me. (they also used all caps! o.O) i really do think i should quit inkpop


ok, done venting on you guys.
i just had to get that out.
(ps. never comment on all caps when commenting x.x)

[Shadows]

lol thank chu matt-oppa v.v that was of nice of chu ;3 but i have my very very bad days

PFFFFFT you's talking to a guy who has to FORCE himself to write a chapter a month in his book (and is currently two months behind <,<) at least you enjoy doing it (at least more than I do v.v)

and lily they weren't yelling they were in BILLY MAYES MODE!

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

yeah o-o lol its okay this is a venting place anyway

venting : i didnt want to kill sebby v.v but i had to...-sniffle-

[lily "the author" hanna]

Salice: I let out a deep breath, here we go... "Look Ciel, i...i'm not very good at this...comforting thing, but i do know about demons and trust me, I'm sure Sebastian will be just fine." I offer a sympathetic smile. or, i hoped it was pretty close. i remember what Sebastian had told me once, He acts like an adult, but really, he's still just a child.
"Trust me," i say evenly.

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

ah o-o a moment of silence for billy mayes too o-o

and i have to force myself to write though >.< honestly i can picture it and all and i can tell it to you vocally but i hate writing it all down lol

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

Ciel : I feel my face crumpling and no matter how hard i yell at myself in my head i can't stop it. My voice is too uneven for me to speak so i nod, feeling my knees trembling. Was he okay?.....Did that even matter...he left me....he promised he would never leave my side..."H-he lied.." My voice sounded like i was crying...was i?

[Shadows]

ah o-o a moment of silence for billy mayes too o-o

and i have to force myself to write though >.< honestly i can picture it and all and i can tell it to you vocally but i hate writing it all down lol

(Billy Mayes, rest in peace v.v)

(It's the EXACT same with me, odd >.>)

[lily "the author" hanna]

i know :3 like, i get these sudden inspirational moments during the day, and i go through the whole thing as though it were a book...
then i think, i should write this down!
i get half way through and...then i start something new by then it's kinda sad

and lol about the Billy Mayes thing Matt ^^ i wonder what it would be like if he were still with us..

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

im just lazy though x3 haha

[lily "the author" hanna]

Salice: I press my lips together. Ah, what do i do now? I rack my brain for something caring...something, dare i say it, motherly. I grimace. ok, let's see.
"Do you want me to walk you to your room?" If he yells, then i'll know he'll be alright soon enough, if not...

[Shadows]

im just lazy though x3 haha

(....*raises hand* me too.)

(It'd probably be the same, only with more OXICLEAN)

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

Arthur : I grimace.
"Y-you shouldn't touch it," Sir Woodly is saying, his face twisted up with worry and disgust. Like Sebastian could just get up and chide me for touching his skull.
"But i have to..you see here" I point to a whole in his head. "This is from someone hitting him from behind," I say. Mr. Barren leans in and so does Keane.
"thats disgusting," Lau says, arching a brow. "But now we know one more thing," He says.
"Whats that?" Sir woodly asks. Most talkative ive seen the man, really.
"That there was more than one killer involved.." Lau smiles.

[lily "the author" hanna]

my friends and i did an oxiclean spoof ^^
but it was with grape juice and it was a 'stainer' instead of a stain removal thing..
we thought it was hilarious while we filmed it, but when we did play back...
it was pretty...eh, not funny.
i think it was just because we were high on sugar and caffeine or something.
everything is funnier at 4 in the morning though :3

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

Ciel : I stare at my hands, everyones voices sound so far away ....i don't even feel like im here....i feel like i died when they were torturing and this was just all a game the devil played on my dead soul in hell....I close my eyes for a minute but suddenly i feel the earth move away from me too fast and i can't stand up again.

[Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~]

anyone have any guesses on who the killers are yet o-o?

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