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Nikki: I held Naypo. "I know, sweetie. I know."
Matt: I nodded as I looked at my dad. "And she killed Naypo, dad."
Aleta: "The mean lady hurt them!" I sobbed into her shirt. "The mean lady took mommy and daddy away!"
Allen: I groaned and forced myself to stand up. "Where are we?"
(We'll have them meet older Aleta later.)
Matt: I nodded as I looked at my dad. "And she killed Naypo, dad."
Aleta: "The mean lady hurt them!" I sobbed into her shirt. "The mean lady took mommy and daddy away!"
Allen: I groaned and forced myself to stand up. "Where are we?"
(We'll have them meet older Aleta later.)
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Naypo: I just holding to Nikki for comfort
Nahuel:" sorry that she got killed matty and are the children are they dead too?" I said I grow attached to my grandchild specially Aleta she was so sweet
Gabriela: I look at Noel scared as I hold Aleta I knew in my heart my daughter was hurt very badly or worst killed but I pray that my feeling was wrong " sweetie do you know where the mean lady took mommy and daddy"
Rider:" I don't know Allen but I'm sure going to find out" I said as I got up while looking around
Nahuel:" sorry that she got killed matty and are the children are they dead too?" I said I grow attached to my grandchild specially Aleta she was so sweet
Gabriela: I look at Noel scared as I hold Aleta I knew in my heart my daughter was hurt very badly or worst killed but I pray that my feeling was wrong " sweetie do you know where the mean lady took mommy and daddy"
Rider:" I don't know Allen but I'm sure going to find out" I said as I got up while looking around
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Matt: I shook my head. "I don't know. I know Aleta's at Noel and Gabriela's. I don't know where the boys are."
Nikki: I just stroked her back, wondering if Nahuel was alright.
Aleta: "The mean lady took daddy to a dark place." I said. "Mommy died."
Allen: I nodded and walked around the empty streets. "It looks kind of like L.A."
Nikki: I just stroked her back, wondering if Nahuel was alright.
Aleta: "The mean lady took daddy to a dark place." I said. "Mommy died."
Allen: I nodded and walked around the empty streets. "It looks kind of like L.A."
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Gabriela: I had tears in my eyes when I heard Aleta said that naypo " where your brothers at Aleta?"
Nahuel:" my mother will go after Aleta and killed anyone that gets in her way"
Rider:" yes it does Allen, let's look around and see if there someone can tell us what happen here"
Nahuel:" my mother will go after Aleta and killed anyone that gets in her way"
Rider:" yes it does Allen, let's look around and see if there someone can tell us what happen here"
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Aleta: I trembled softly, thinking hard. "They're not dead or in the dark place....but they're not here either." I looked up, with tearful eyes. "She's gonna get me." I whimpered.
Matt: I closed my eyes. "I know that."
Allen: I nodded and walked towards the town center, but the place seemed deserted.
Matt: I closed my eyes. "I know that."
Allen: I nodded and walked towards the town center, but the place seemed deserted.
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Gabriela:" I won't let her take you away from me sweetie " i told her before I pick her in my arms I went to Noel told him we need to get to safety
Nahuel:" I hope Noel and gabriela can stand up to my mom for Aleta's sake"
Rider: I look around for any sign for any living being but so far nothing like everyone was just gone
Raven: I was on the trail to find my great-grand daughter
Nahuel:" I hope Noel and gabriela can stand up to my mom for Aleta's sake"
Rider: I look around for any sign for any living being but so far nothing like everyone was just gone
Raven: I was on the trail to find my great-grand daughter
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Noel: I nodded and focused on teleporting us.
(ooh! I got an idea. What if, Raven takes Aleta like she planned, but after taining Aleta, the girl kills raven?)
Aleta: "She's close." I said softly.
Allen: I saw something move in the shadows. "Hello?" I called.
Matt: "Me too. She wants to raise Aleta to be her next generation."
(ooh! I got an idea. What if, Raven takes Aleta like she planned, but after taining Aleta, the girl kills raven?)
Aleta: "She's close." I said softly.
Allen: I saw something move in the shadows. "Hello?" I called.
Matt: "Me too. She wants to raise Aleta to be her next generation."
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Nahuel:" I figure that Matty specially since she so disappointed in me"
Rider:" come out what you are" i call out
raven: I was closer to the girl I know
Gabriela: I hold onto aleta tightly while worrying about the boys. I didn't want to lose my grand babies too specially that I lost my daughter
Rider:" come out what you are" i call out
raven: I was closer to the girl I know
Gabriela: I hold onto aleta tightly while worrying about the boys. I didn't want to lose my grand babies too specially that I lost my daughter
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( also I love the idea )
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Matt: I nodded solemnly.
Aleta: I trembled. "Really close!" I whined.
Alelen: "Ouch! " I hissed as something sharp cut my face.
Aleta: I trembled. "Really close!" I whined.
Alelen: "Ouch! " I hissed as something sharp cut my face.
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Gabriela: I look at Noel worried because I scared of losing Aleta and before I knew a woman stop me and Noel while taking Aleta out of my arms
Raven: I smiled as I had this girl back
Rider: I kept my guard up as I look for the thing that cut Allen
Nahuel: I sigh as I wish I knew my mom was still alive sooner
Raven: I smiled as I had this girl back
Rider: I kept my guard up as I look for the thing that cut Allen
Nahuel: I sigh as I wish I knew my mom was still alive sooner
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Aleta: I screamed and kicked anf fought.
Allen: I walked closer to where a pair of glowing yellow eyes glared out of an alley.
Matt: I sat down rubbing my temples.
Allen: I walked closer to where a pair of glowing yellow eyes glared out of an alley.
Matt: I sat down rubbing my temples.
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Rider; I saw the pair of eyes too so I called " come out we not scared of you"
Gabriela:" give her back to me now" I yell as I try to get Aleta back
Raven:" your demon and you love the arch-angel, your more weak then my son" I told as I still hold onto the girl. I kicked this worthless demon into imprisonment too along side my son and grandson. I look that arch-angel the only person who might take the girl away
Nahuel: I just watch gabriela fall into room and I knew that my mom got her hands on Aleta
Gabriela:" give her back to me now" I yell as I try to get Aleta back
Raven:" your demon and you love the arch-angel, your more weak then my son" I told as I still hold onto the girl. I kicked this worthless demon into imprisonment too along side my son and grandson. I look that arch-angel the only person who might take the girl away
Nahuel: I just watch gabriela fall into room and I knew that my mom got her hands on Aleta
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Matt: I knew at that moment and paled.
Noel: My eyes darkened as I summoned my sword.
Older Aleta: I stepped out of the shadows, only now getting a good look at them, but still scowling. "What do you want?"
(Looks like Aqua from Birth By Sleep)
Noel: My eyes darkened as I summoned my sword.
Older Aleta: I stepped out of the shadows, only now getting a good look at them, but still scowling. "What do you want?"
(Looks like Aqua from Birth By Sleep)
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Raven:" your all alone now angel. Your lover is gone, your only daughter is dead, your grandsons are no where to be found, and your granddaughter will learn to hate you so just give up"
Gabriela: I stand as I saw Matt and nahuel but I end up crying because my family I knew is all ruin"
Rider:" Aleta?" I said shocking as I look at her. This can't be my sister she too older, I just saw my sister and she was only 6 but right now this girl this woman looks like my sister
Gabriela: I stand as I saw Matt and nahuel but I end up crying because my family I knew is all ruin"
Rider:" Aleta?" I said shocking as I look at her. This can't be my sister she too older, I just saw my sister and she was only 6 but right now this girl this woman looks like my sister
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Noel: I snarled. "No way."
Older Aleta: I growled. "How do you know that name?"
ALlen: "We're...your brothers."
Older Aleta: I growled. "How do you know that name?"
ALlen: "We're...your brothers."
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Rider:" Aleta it's us Allen and rider but you used to called me rida" I said as I trying figure out what happen
Raven:" fine then it your death I guess you going see your dead daughter soon thought
Raven:" fine then it your death I guess you going see your dead daughter soon thought
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Aleta: I snarled. "How many times are you creatures going to try that? Tell Galeo that I'm not going to attack him. But if he keeps pushing me, I will."
Noel: I nodded. "So be it."
Noel: I nodded. "So be it."
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Rider:" Aleta we telling the truth we don't know happen to us after that bitch push us through a portal after I send you to grandpa and grandma place where I thought you would be safe I know you remember that bitch because she kill mom Aleta"
Raven: the moment I summoned my sword I put it through this arch-angel heart
Raven: the moment I summoned my sword I put it through this arch-angel heart
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Aleta: I snarled and glared at him. "Of course I remember her!" I hissed. "This does nothing to prove you're Allen and Rider!"
Allen: I sighed. "Aleta."
Aleta: I turned my steely gaze on him.
Allen: "Lasteria umna fineverra." I said.
Aleta: I gasped as he spoke in the language we'd made up. Nobody but Allen knew about it. I felt tears slip from my eyes as my knees buckled.
Noel: I gasped as I was soon joining my daughter. I walked through the gate and saw Naypo and Nikki.
Allen: I sighed. "Aleta."
Aleta: I turned my steely gaze on him.
Allen: "Lasteria umna fineverra." I said.
Aleta: I gasped as he spoke in the language we'd made up. Nobody but Allen knew about it. I felt tears slip from my eyes as my knees buckled.
Noel: I gasped as I was soon joining my daughter. I walked through the gate and saw Naypo and Nikki.
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Rider:" Aleta I promise I will going to take you to park and I will kept that promise once we figured out happen to me and Allen" I said before I went go her kiss on her forehead like I usually do
Naypo: once I saw my dad come through the gate I start crying and I went hugged him " no you can't be dead too dad" I said
Naypo: once I saw my dad come through the gate I start crying and I went hugged him " no you can't be dead too dad" I said
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Aleta: I clung to my brothers. "I thought you guys were dead too!"
Allen: "Too? Who else died?"
Aleta: "Noel."
Noel: I nodded softly. "Raven got Aleta."
Allen: "Too? Who else died?"
Aleta: "Noel."
Noel: I nodded softly. "Raven got Aleta."
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Rider:" where dad and grandma? they can't be dead too" I said
Naypo:" my poor daughter she through such much. dad where are my sons does raven have them too?"
Naypo:" my poor daughter she through such much. dad where are my sons does raven have them too?"
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Aleta: I shook my head. "She trapped them in The Void."
Noel: I shook my head. "Aleta said that they weren't dead of in The Void, but they weren't on this earth any more."
Noel: I shook my head. "Aleta said that they weren't dead of in The Void, but they weren't on this earth any more."
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Rider:" Aleta how old are you now?" I ask her
Naypo:" dad I'm so worry about my children"
Naypo:" dad I'm so worry about my children"
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Aleta: "Sixteen." I responded.
Noel: "I'm worried for them too," I assured her.
Noel: "I'm worried for them too," I assured her.
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