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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:12 pm

Allen: after hitting my brother a few more times I drag him out of bed I took to kitchen " I got rider up like you said mom now pancake me" I said as I went to grab plate to held it out for my pancakes

Naypo:" you got wait Allen for everyone before you get you pancakes"

Nahuel:" nikki I think my mom is going to make me pay for trying to kill her"

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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:20 pm

Matt: I stood and picked Aleta up and headed into the kitchen. "Good morning all."

Aleta: "G'morning!" I called.

Nikki: I frowned. "Tell me you don't mean what I think you do."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:28 pm

Allen:" hey dad and Aleta " I said then I look at mom " pancake me everyone is here"

Naypo: " morning my love" i said to matt beforeI sigh before I gave Allen his pancake and handed rider a cup of coffe because he was still sleepily

Rider: " morning" I said sleepily before drink my coffee

Nahuel: "she going to hurt me and hurt my family Nikki"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:33 pm

Matt: I laughed at my oldest songs Antics. He was so much like my mom it was crazy. Gotta admit. She would've made a handsome man.

Aleta: I hopped down and ran over to Rider. I adored Rider. "Morning Rida." I caller him Rida cause the er sound was too hard to say.

Nikki: "That's what I thought..."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:40 pm

Naypo:" pancakes Matt?" I ask him as i held a plate of pancakes out to him

Allen: I happily sat down and ate my pancakes

Rider:" hey girly " I said to my sister after I finished my coffe and now more awake

Nahuel:" I'm going up to earth to warn Matt and help protect them"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:10 pm

Matt: "Thank you m'love."

Aleta: "Rida! We goin' to tha park today? You promised!"

Nikki: I nodded.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:18 pm

Rider:" i remember Aleta and yes I going to take you to the park "

Naypo: I smiled before I kiss him sweetly before I let him eat his pancake and hearing Allen asking for more pancakes

Allen: I held my empty plate out to my mom to get more pancakes

Nahuel: i said good bye to Nikki before I went to earth to matty and naypo place
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:25 pm

Matt: I sat down until dad. showed up.

Aleta: "Granpa!" I cried happily.

Matt: "Hey, dad. Whats up?"
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:29 pm

Nahuel:" hello Aleta and matty i need to talk to you now important" I said without sounding worry

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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:32 pm

Matt: I frowned and nodded.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:36 pm

Nahuel: I lead matty into other room before I said " matty you and naypo need to pack up the childern and go find safety, my mother your grandmother who you never met is coming back to hurt me and my family meaning your family to get back at me for trying to kill her"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:54 pm

Matt: I felt myself pale and nodded.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:57 pm

Nahuel:" get going matty I will find my mom and slow her down so you guys have a better chance of escape"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:03 pm

Matt: I nodded and walked out. "Boys. Come help me." I called.

Aleta: I frowned as my brothers went to help daddy. "Mama, what's wrong?"
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:08 pm

Naypo;" nothing you got to worry about for now Aleta " I told her to not to worry her

Rider: I follow my dad with Allen wondering what exactly is needed to be done

Nahuel: I went to find my mom to try to stop her
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:09 pm

Matt: I began packing clothes and necessities in suit cases quickly.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:14 pm

Allen:" dad what exactly is coming for us " I ask him because I knew some bad is going to happen to us by the fact that dad is packing suit cases
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:16 pm

Matt: "An extremely pissed female demon."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:37 pm

Allen; I nod before I help dad pack more until I heard a scream and crying

Rider: I heard a scream I knew it came from mom and the crying was from Aleta

Naypo: When I saw a woman appear in my home I knew she was nahuel's mom I grab aleta and run to Aleta's room since that room was the farest room away. Once I lock the door behind me I hidden Aleta in the space in her closet " Aleta stay here sweetie and no matter what don't come put until I or daddy or one of your brothers come get you" I told her before I kiss her forehead and close the closet door. I stand up just as Aleta bedroom door slam open and the woman came close to me

Raven( nahuel's mother): I came to my son nahuel's son place after i took care off nahuel, to kill all of them I went after my grandson wife and his daughter since I saw them first. After corner them in a room I broke the door open to see the wife ready to fight to the death which happen I end up breaking her back causing her to screaming before I slit her thoart killing her then I look for the daughter I found in closet she started crying when she saw her mommy dead
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:57 pm

Aleta: I was crying. "Mommy!" I cried.

Matt: I heard Aleta crying and ran to her room. I saw Naypo already dead and lunged at my grandma. "Leave my daughter alone, bitch!" I cried, summoning my sword.

Nikki: I was at the gate, ready to greet whoever died.
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Post by Fallen rose Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:04 am

Raven:I grab the daughter neck causing him to stop " try to attack me I will snap her neck she will be with her mother before you touch me"

Rider: me and Allen follow dad to Aleta room see mom dead and heard the woman threated to kill Aleta. So we trying to think of a way to get Aleta away from her

Naypo: I walk through the gate just feeling I failed to protect my family I saw Nikki so I went to hug her because I need some comfort right now
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Post by Unabound Justice Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:50 am

Nikki: I pushed back my surprise at seeing Naypo and hugged her.

ALeta: "Daddy!" I said, as tears fell down my face.

Matt: I trembled. "Put my daughter down. She's just a child."
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Post by Fallen rose Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:11 am

Naypo:" Nikki I failed, I failed protecting my family " I cried

Raven: I smirked " you just like your father weak. you don't deserve to have demon blood running in your veins specially my demon blood." I picked up his daughter and kept her tightly in my arms " to fix that I'm going take your daughter away and make her pure demon perfect for my heir while you wasted away in prison with your father never to see your family again"

Rider: while the woman is too busy focusing on dad I managed to rip Aleta away and Allen knock the woman down. I quickly told her " I will take you park another day but you going to grandma and granddad place for awhile" I kiss her on the forehead before I teleport her only to mom's parents I knew she will be safe there.

Raven: I was so pissed off after I got up and seeing the girl gone so I open portal and push both the sons through it so they won't bother me specially that they in the future where it's too late to spot. Once the portal close I turn to my grandson " I will find your daughter where your son send her too" I told him before I send him to the same room where my son is imprison at
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Post by Unabound Justice Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:29 am

Nikki: "It's alright, sweety. It's all okay. You didn't fail."

Aleta: Next thing I new, I was on grandmad and grandpa's couch. Alone. "Rida? Daddy? Allen? M-mommy?" I said before wailing miserably.

Noel: I woke to the sound of crying and got up, confused.
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Post by Fallen rose Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:36 am

Naypo:" Nikki I'm so scared that I might one of my children or Matt come through that gate right now"

Gabriela: I woke up too, to sound of crying so I got up went to find the source of crying which I found Aleta " sweetheart what you doing here? Where mommy and daddy?" I ask her as I pull her into a hug

Nahuel: I was leaning against a wall when I saw my son appear in this room " she got you too"

Rider: I fell to ground after bring pushed and Allen fell right next to me and I look around wondering where are we
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Post by Unabound Justice Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:44 am

Nikki: I held Naypo. "I know, sweetie. I know."

Matt: I nodded as I looked at my dad. "And she killed Naypo, dad."

Aleta: "The mean lady hurt them!" I sobbed into her shirt. "The mean lady took mommy and daddy away!"

Allen: I groaned and forced myself to stand up. "Where are we?"

(We'll have them meet older Aleta later.)
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