Re: House of Oblivion

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:53 pm

Ciel : The noise is too loud. I get up and walk calmly down the halls to face two frantic teenagers. I arch a brow."Now what?"

by BariJoy Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:59 pm

The woman looked at Allison's feet. "You're not wearing shoes. I believe I've told you what can happen when your feet aren't protected." She stomped on Allison's bare feet. "What have you done to hair?" The man said, disgusted. He seized her now short hair and yanked her forward. "You can't even take care of yourself without us," the two said together.

by KenzieJo Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:01 pm

Jack: I quickly slip the card up my sleeve so he wont notice it. "Me and alice heard something down the hall, a mans voice. She went to check it out. I'm-" I sigh, knowing how stupid I sound. "I'm getting the phone then checking whats up." I slip into the room around him, grabbing the small phone off the bed, and begin heading out to see where Alice went.

by KenzieJo Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:09 pm

now Im confused...

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:11 pm

ive been confused o-o........

by **Cali** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:14 pm

I open the door and saw my gun and knife were gone. So were my pills. I panicked. I was useless and I had no way of protecting anyone. "Let her go!" I yell, looking at the guy.

by KenzieJo Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:16 pm

I was okay for a while
but Im just gonna roll with it.

Jack: I hear Alice yell, and quicken my pace, reaching her quickly. I see the two surriounding Allison. "Who are they?" I ask. My body stiffening.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:17 pm

>.< (way too confused. i think i may have to quit the c.c )

by **Cali** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:18 pm

"I-I don't know." I say and saw shadows in the room. I closed my eyes tightly, hands clenching so tight, my nails broke my palm's skin, blood dripping out of my hands. "Light is Light, Mind is Mind." I whispered over and over. I opened my eyes, my eyes glowing bright green. I then rushed to a shadow, merging it, becoming the shadow, my body becoming a blur as I went to it.

by KenzieJo Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:22 pm

hmmm. well that is depressing.
this is not going as smoothly as my last one. hmph.
it sounded good when I wrote it, but it was two in the morning.

by BariJoy Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:22 pm

"These two are your friends?" The woman asked disgustedly, "Your poor mother expected better of you." "Even so, the least you could do is greet them," the man said. He dragged Allison to her feet by her hair. "Hello, Jack, Alice," Allison choked out.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:24 pm

im just really confused and since alot of the characters are a like its hard for me to distinguish anything o-o
its either someone is sobbing because of their past
or someone is getting a text that make no sense to anyone else.. its like way too cliche for me to get..

by **Cali** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:25 pm

I suddenly appeared behind them both, voice firm. "Let. Her. Go."

by KenzieJo Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:25 pm

this is true.... I need to think. maybe starting over would be easier. different plot, though. Must think. I be in chatbox.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:27 pm

its not chur fault though >.< i do that all the time so i get it
im just not feeling the flow suddenly cus i dont know what i can and can't do and its hard to work with characters that are all pretty much not connecting or too alike..if that made any sense

by KenzieJo Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:29 pm

it does.... hmmm. maybe we can discuss in chatbox, and find what people want in a Cc. to find a general consensus. Or telling on here is fine.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:30 pm

ill go to the chat box if you want
im trying to not start another c.c ive been thinking about lately x3 lol

by BariJoy Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:32 pm

"Why should I, girl?" The man questioned coldly. He let go of Allison, though, shoving her to the floor.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:34 pm

I appear next to Allison, "You don't know who you're messing with." I growl lowly.

by BariJoy Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:38 pm

"We shall take our leave," the man said, a twinge of fear poking through. "A word of advice, children," the woman said coldly, "You'll have to get over yourselves if you're to be any use to them." With that, they dissolved back into mist and were sucked back into the vent.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:55 pm

i made the other c.c i was talking about :3 do you want me to leave the link here?

by **Cali** Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:45 pm

sounds good but i don't know if i should join or not.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:05 pm

well you can if you want but you dont have to ;3

by **Cali** Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:09 am

BariJoy wrote:"We shall take our leave," the man said, a twinge of fear poking through. "A word of advice, children," the woman said coldly, "You'll have to get over yourselves if you're to be any use to them." With that, they dissolved back into mist and were sucked back into the vent.

I sighed sadly then shrieked as an unknown force sent me into a wall, my head colliding with the wall first. I blacked out, feeling warm liquid seeping out of the corner of my forehead.

by **Cali** Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:27 pm

WELLO JELLO! O.O Very Happy

by **Cali** Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:47 pm

hello jello kello pello? o.O hmmm, nothing. gah epic fail! x.x

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