Re: Warrior Valley

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:38 pm

Jasmine: I had heard what was said between the 2, though curiosity over took me I was determined to hide it from them, so I stayed quiet and opened the door to the house.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:39 pm

Alice: "Alice, promise-" "I won't do it!" I yelled at him, anger and anguish filling my voice. Yet, all was lost. When I was like this, I knew there was no going back.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:04 pm

Kyle: I turned back, "Won't do what?" I questioned the both of them.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:06 pm

Alice: "It's nothing. Let's just set up base." I say, brushing past both of them. I walked in.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:19 pm

Kyle: I walk past Jasmine trying to follow her.

Jasmine: I stopped Deckland at the door with a look of worry, "May I ask you please."

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:21 pm

Deckland: I sighed, "When Alice is like that, its like you can't lighten her up. And that's when she's unstable. She used to cut herself but I don't know if she does it or not still." I say so only Kyle and Jasmine could hear.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:42 pm

OMG I just noticed... Kyle isn't even a character in this book :/

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:47 pm

AHAHA! Wait. Oh crap his name is Anthony hahahah.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:49 pm

And that makes all this even funnier, cause Alice was another character from my book that this is about.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:57 pm

Oh ahahaha! Thats Ironic. Very Happy

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:03 pm

Lets uhm just pretend Kyle was Anthony this whole time... Kyle was the tactics analyzer for the team and really had a very minimal section to the plot. Funny enough the 3 main chars(Jasmine not becoming a main char till the end of the book) are Alice Anthony and Jasmine. So lets start it back up with Kyle being Anthony.

Anthony: Was still following Alice(Which he had already left before Deckhand had said that). I asked, "Please calm down Alice."

Jasmine: I looked at Deckhand, I wasn't really sure what to say though.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:08 pm

Hhaahaha, thats kinda funny though.,

Alice: I sighed and leaned against a wall then brushed my hair out of my face. "I don't think I can do this, Anthony." I say.

Deckland: I sigh, "Please don't tell anyone Jasmine."

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:22 pm

Anthony: "What is it you can't do?"

Jasmine: Still trying to find words to say, I finally just nod my head in agreement and move out of his way. I looked at the ground, completely stunned.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:34 pm

Deckland: "Can you promise me?" I asked.

Alice: "This mission. Deckland continues to mention the past and I hate it."

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:42 pm

Anthony: "The past?" I was confused, out of all of this all I knew is that she had gotten upset and left, I didn't even know Deckland had anything to do with it. With each moment I had become more confused.

Jasmine: I looked back up at Deckland, my face looked more sad then anything now, but I looked back down and then nodded my head promising I wouldn't tell.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:59 pm

Deckland: "Thank you."

Alice: I nodded and looked up at him with blank eyes, "Before we met you guys and became assigned." I looked down, tears welling up. "I promised him I wouldn't tell anyone I didn't trusted but I trust you." I took a deep breath, "I don't think I can do this because once I kill someone, I won't be able to stop."

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:06 pm

Jasmine: So many thoughts were going through my head, I couldn't concentrate at all. I knew so many things about Anthony that didn't seem right for me to accept, but I did without issue. Now someone else, someone tells me something about another person. My head was in pain but I continued to hold the door for Deckhand to go in trying to not show my feelings.

Anthony: I was shocked, I couldn't think of what to say to reassure her that she could stop if she tried. So instead I just rested a hand on her shoulder trying to think of something to say.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:11 pm

Alice: I looked up at him, eyes filled with tears.

Deckland: I walked in and went to set up base.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:17 pm

So just to pose this question cause I forget, what relation do Deckhand and Alice have?

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:20 pm

Brother and Sister. Well, foster siblings.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:29 pm

Alright that explains a little more for me.

Anthony: "Why is it you don't think you can stop killing if you start?"

Jasmine: I follow Deckhand to help set up the base.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:33 pm

Deckland: I ignore the conversation Anthony and Alice were having.

Alice: "I used to be in a gang and I was the leader. I remember the first kill I made...And I couldn't stop." I whispered, tears falling.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:42 pm

Jasmine: "We need to setup the primary section on the second floor deckhand." I said trying to make it seem like I hadn't gone mute or something.

Anthony: I just didn't know what to say, it was hard for me to believe I guess...

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:46 pm

Deckland: I nodded, "Alright. Lead the way." I say.

Alice: I looked away, hugging my knees as I slid down the wall into a sitting position.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:08 pm

Anthony: Falling slowly to the ground next to her, I moved my arm slowly around her neck and try to pull it to me.

Jasmine: I lead the way to the stairs on the other side of the house towards the back. Before I opened the door to the stairwell I turned back to Deckhand, "Do you hate Anthony?" I asked sounding fairly innocent.

by **Cali** Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:36 pm

Deckland: I shake my head, "No. I trust him. I don't like him, but I don't hate him either."

Alice: I let him pull me towards him and I sit there, crying.

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