Re: Vocaloid Heart ♔

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:02 pm

i picked it o-o sorry v.v

gah now i feel bad because you have no where else to go
im just on the new world c.c
its not that bad really
im about to bring in a big "bringing people back to life' plot

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:08 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:i picked it o-o sorry v.v

gah now i feel bad because you have no where else to go
im just on the new world c.c
its not that bad really
im about to bring in a big "bringing people back to life' plot

Naw, is okay. The over nine-thousand thing was just a way for me to not feel bad about it's horrendous rank. ^^

does 'bringing people back to life' have to do with wishing them back with the dragonballs? o.o

Umm....would you guys mind if I tried the new worlds chat? >.> I mean, It's ok if you'd rather I didn't join I just figured I'd ask >.>

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:10 pm

the book itself is not horrendous o-o dimi likes it alot actually and dimi doesnt even like half the things i write and im his f.f v.v.....

And i wish v.v but its all about surgery and stuff

and i would personally love it if you joined :3 i dont think anyone else would mind and i promise to keep my one extremely gay charrie away from yours ^-^

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:13 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:the book itself is not horrendous o-o dimi likes it alot actually and dimi doesnt even like half the things i write and im his f.f v.v.....

And i wish v.v but its all about surgery and stuff

and i would personally love it if you joined :3 i dont think anyone else would mind and i promise to keep my one extremely gay charrie away from yours ^-^

Thanks ^^ is just it got difficult for people to pick my book and it just hung around the 300-600 range.
At that point I just got frustrated with the politics >.<

Dragnoballs make everything easier v.v

ermmm...okay, you'd just have to put up with my questions first XP
Link please?

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:15 pm

oh okay :3 my book is about to die because of politics and my lack of microsoft v.v -sniffle- but thats okay.

and yes yes it is o-o

and knock yourself out :3 i am here to answer

linkage! : https://characterchat.rpg-board.net/futuristic-f11/new-world-t126.htm

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:24 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:oh okay :3 my book is about to die because of politics and my lack of microsoft v.v -sniffle- but thats okay.

and yes yes it is o-o

and knock yourself out :3 i am here to answer

linkage! : https://characterchat.rpg-board.net/futuristic-f11/new-world-t126.htm

Nuuuu your book is cute gaby! I likes it v.v your books always seem to shoot straight up to the low hundreds.

One of these days I think you should write a book you really really like and shoot to get it in the top five. I know you'd make it!

Kk, Imma go over dere and ask me questions, thanks gaby =)

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:27 pm

Awwww you're movin? that sucks. wi-fi is good tho! o~o

Ayumi: I struggle then get one of my ankles loose. I then drive my knee into his side.

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:29 pm

oh no o-o i'd cry if i got to a top spot. I'm not ready for that kind of feedback and what you said is exactly the problem
my stories are cute
when there not supposed to be v.v...lol

please dun freak out @>@

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:35 pm

gah okay the two others with the explicit making out is starting to freak me out >.< i can't do that

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:44 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:Awwww you're movin? that sucks. wi-fi is good tho! o~o

Ayumi: I struggle then get one of my ankles loose. I then drive my knee into his side.

John: The viraloid stumbles to the side from the harsh blow. A flush of anger crosses his face as he recovers and darts a furious look to Ayumi. But, in the blink of an eye, The quet sound of metal puncturing metal rings out and his expression changes to shock, and falls limp to the ground with a sword through his head. On the other side of the room John brings his arm down and his expression softens. Quietly he walks to the body of the viraloid and pulls out his sword from it's head. Another moment later and he cuts the chains on Ayumi's ankles. Then, he looks down to her, his expression softer now.
"Are you alright?"

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:46 pm

Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~ wrote:gah okay the two others with the explicit making out is starting to freak me out >.< i can't do that

I know! I read a book on inkpop where there were two gay guys. I thought, okay they're not doing anything...gross so it's cool...then they started making out and It was like 'EEEEEEHH! MY EYES!!!'
It was really well written, but I told the guy he really needs to put a warning about that stuff >.<

by **Gaby_Babo-Unnie:3!~** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:48 pm

its not two guys its two girls who are making right now in that c.c >.< not that thats why its bothering me but i'm one of those. just hint to it and its okay people not go and tell me everything that happens

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:58 pm

I stare up at him, sitting up wide eyed. "I-I think so." I studder then weakly stand, swaying.

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:17 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:I stare up at him, sitting up wide eyed. "I-I think so." I studder then weakly stand, swaying.

John: John sheathed his sword into his belt. She looked okay, but as she swayed John felt something was off.
He knelt down and felt her ankle with his hands.
"There's some slight damage to your foot..." he said standing back up "I will escort you to a hospital." (She's not a robot is she?)

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:25 pm

(she is. but her human self is in a coma and like, it affects her in a way.)

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:31 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:(she is. but her human self is in a coma and like, it affects her in a way.)

Okay, instead of hospital, repair place...?

John: "Can you walk...?"

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:35 pm

maybe..

"I-I think so." I say but when I take a step, pain shoots into my body. A small cry leaves me and I fall onto my hands and knees. My side is in complete agony along with my ankles and wrists. My arms can barely hold me up.

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:41 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:maybe..

"I-I think so." I say but when I take a step, pain shoots into my body. A small cry leaves me and I fall onto my hands and knees. My side is in complete agony along with my ankles and wrists. My arms can barely hold me up.

John: John quickly rushed over to her and put her arm around him. Her body was trembling...she looked like she was in incredible pain...no condition to walk anywhere. Without a word, John lifted her up started carrying her to the hospital.

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:46 pm

I whimpered as he lifted me up. I closed my eyes tight, tears sliding down my face.

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:06 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:I whimpered as he lifted me up. I closed my eyes tight, tears sliding down my face.

John: He walked as slowly and as smoothly as he could. The girl didn't make much noise...just a few whimpers and small grunts from what John assumed to be the pain...they were outside now, and had managed to find a road to follow. A small twinkle of light flashed in the corner of his eye, coming from the girl. He looked down at her and saw the small streaks of tears staining her cheeks. John's eyes grew wider, he'd never seen those before...he wanted to know...but the anguish on her face deterred him from asking.
Finally they reached a hospital, once they wre inside John got the attention of a nurse and handed her off to them.

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:08 pm

Before the doctors take me, I look at him and say, "Thank you." I smile at him, eyes becoming focused on his.

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:15 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:Before the doctors take me, I look at him and say, "Thank you." I smile at him, eyes becoming focused on his.

John: Strange...when he looked down into her eyes there was something different about her...despite the agony her body was in, despite the pain...a strange peace came into her eyes. A relief that seemed to make things...better.
"Thank you," She says to him. and for some reason, it makes him feel warm...
For John, during the last hour he felt nothing...he remembered every viraloid he took down, their expressions, their anger...and felt no fear...he saw how that last one terrorized her...but felt no anger...what was that...? Before he felt alone, lost...almost afraid...but in an instant, it all went away. When the red light blinked in his eye, all emotion left him, and he felt nothing.
What was that...?

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:20 pm

30 Minutes later, I lay in a hospital bed thinking.

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:30 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:30 Minutes later, I lay in a hospital bed thinking.

The past half hour John spent sitting in the waiting room, pondering the strange 'emotionless state' and trying to find out more about his mechanical aspects, lifting his shirt and poking himself here and there to see if any ports or compartments opened up.
"Sir?" chimed a friendly nurse from across the room. John's head sprang up and stared at her. "She's stable now...you can go visit her if you like," John stared up at her. Visit....?
He followed the nurse for a few minutes and soon found her room.

by **Cali** Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:39 pm

I closed my eyes, sighing. I then opened them and my vision was still hazy. I sighed then saw two figures out of the corner of my eye. I look over and see a nurse and that guy from earlier.

by Shadows Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:55 pm

KaitlinAnne~ wrote:I closed my eyes, sighing. I then opened them and my vision was still hazy. I sighed then saw two figures out of the corner of my eye. I look over and see a nurse and that guy from earlier.

John: John stood there in the doorway for a moment. Staring at her in the bed.
"Go on in..." the nurse said with a motion of her arms.
He snapped up out of his gaze and peered at her, a small hint of confusion in his face. Then, he looked back into the room and took a few steps in.
John fixed his eyes back on her and gazed at her condition, the bed, the curtains the robe, everything.
"How're you feeling?" he finally said, more serious than he expected.

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