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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:13 pm

Nikki ate too, smiling.

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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:19 pm

Nahuel: I kept eating until I was done eating and i waited Nikki to finish eating

Gabriela: I was woken up by naypo crying and fussing I guessing she was either hungry again or she need to be change
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:20 pm

Nikki finished ael.nd looked at Nahuel.

Noel sat up with a yawn.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:25 pm

Nahuel: " ready to go home my love?"

Gabriela: I was got out of bed with naypo in my arms when I notice was awake too " I will be back I'm going to change her diaper " I said to Noel as I was right about she needed to be change
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:27 pm

Nikki nodded and stood up. "Yep,"

Noel nodded, still bleary. "Alright, love."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:33 pm

Nahuel: I took her hand before we left for home

Gabriela: naypo didn't like to be changed so she fussed with me the whole time once I finish I carry naypo to kitchen with me to get a bottle ready for her that when I heard knocking on the front door
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:34 pm

Nikki followed him with a smile.

Noel stood and went to the door and opened it.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:39 pm

Nahuel: just as we got home I saw two demons waiting at front door for me

Gabriela: I could see who at the door when Noel opened it which was two angels are the door
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:41 pm

Nikki just sighed softly, knowing that meant he would have to leave again.

Noel frowned. "Can I help you?"
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:52 pm

Angel 1:" noel a battle just broke out between us and the demons and we need your help to stop it before it get worse"

Angel 2:" we know your not the archangel anymore we have no one to lead us so please help us win and if it doesn't stop that battle will spread and might come here to the states"

Gabriela: I heard those angels talk to Noel I left for bedroom with freshly made bottle and naypo I didn't want those angels to see or hear me cry if I do because the thought of Noel leaving scares me so much right now specially since it's not too long ago that me and him got split apart in hell and I almost died

Nahuel:" Nikki go inside I come in after I was finish talk to them"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:55 pm

Noel was divided between staying with gabriela and naypo and going to make sure they are safe.

Nikki nodded, hiding her sadness until she was inside and even then she held back tears as she went to fix a glass of water.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:04 pm

Angel 1:" I know it's will be hard for to decide because of your new family you have now Noel but please help us just like my friend here if the battle doesn't stop it will spread and come here do you want your family at risk of being killed badly because you chose to stay here with them instead of fighting to make sure they live long happy lives"

Nahuel: after talking long with the demons i went inside to talk to niki
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:06 pm

Noel closed his eyes and nodded. "I will help.." he said reluctantly. "Just let me say goodbye.

Nikki was chugging the glass of water.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:12 pm

angel 2:" okay thank you for helping us"

gabriela: i was in the bedroom holding naypo close to my chest as i thought about noel leaving

nahuel: i was nikki drinking water " nikki can i talk to you:
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:16 pm

Noel walked into the bedroom looking sad. "Gabriela, love..."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:20 pm

gabriela: " i know you leaving noel i just wish you weren't" i said as i look up at him now with tears in my eyes
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:21 pm

Noel wrapped his arms around her lightly. "I know. I'm sorry love."

Nikki put the drink down and looked at him. "Sure."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:25 pm

gabriela:" its not your fault that you got to go i heard what those angel told us so i understand why you leaving but i just so scared noel"

nahuel:" theres battle broke out and the demons need me right now"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:28 pm

Noel was painstricken. "It'll be okay I promise."

Nikki nodded. "I understand." She said. "Go." That one word felt like she'd just been stabbed through the heart.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:31 pm

gabriela: i nod " please be really carefully in this battle me and naypo don't want to lose you " i said as i look down naypo who was just looking at us as she really unsure what was happening right now

nahuel: i nod then i pull her close to me and kiss her deeply for a long time before i pull away and said " i will return as soon as i can my love"
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:34 pm

Noel nodded. "I will. I intend to return home to both of you as soon as possible.

Nikki nodded. "I'll be waiting."
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:36 pm

gabriela:" okay we both being waitng for you my angel" i said before i kiss him goodbye for now

nahuel: " okay my love" i said before i left to go with the other demons to headed off to the battle
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:40 pm

Nikki watched him go, silent tears streaming down her face.

Noel kissed her back before kissing his daughter on the forehead and leaving.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:52 pm

gabriela: after noel left naypo started crying i believe she knew that her father might not be comming back so i comfort her and told her that daddy will be back soon

nahuel: i headed off the battle field for this battle

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the angel/demon battle lasted for a year before ending,it was hard and tough but neither side give up until lucifer call back his armies to hell so for now angels won the battle but with a cost many cities were ruin and family killed by the demons it specially happen in the states because lucifer still want to kill child of noel who kill lucifer son. this cause gabriela to go into hiding with her child to waited out the battle all the angels knews but noel the ther angels didn't tell what is happen back home so they won't lose their leader in middle of the battle and while the demon attack the cities they were order by nahue to protect his's lover so he doesn't go run off to get back to her by they didn't tell him how she was doing or anything like that so he doesn't what been happening in his lover's life
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Post by Unabound Justice Sun Aug 07, 2011 6:53 pm

Noels swas so glad to be going to home to his lover. Every night for the past year, he'd dreampt of her and their beautiful child.

Nikki had changed. her once long hair had been cut to shoulder-length and was kept back in a bun, she'd thinned out some and her once strong stance had become docile and unsure. Her body had taken on the appearance of a woman who didn't know what would happen tomorrow but her crystaline blue eyes still held that glow of certainty.
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Post by Fallen rose Sun Aug 07, 2011 7:11 pm

Gabriela: ever since those demon at my and noel's home few months ago and took almost took naypo from me I been moving around the city to hide from anymore demons attack. right now me and naypo are hotel for once I thought since today is my little naypo first birthday we should stay somewhere comfortable tonight. I watch naypo play with the Teddy bear I gave her birthday. I kept thinking about Noel specially when I look naypo who has his blond hair. I wonder will he realized it me when he see me. I look more rough looking from fighting demons with scars I got. I pray that I will see my lover again.

Nahuel: I'm on way home finally I will get to hold Nikki in my arms again. I missed her so much but I know she safe while I was got. I walk up my place quickly. I just couldn't wait to see Nikki. Once I got to the door I just quickly opened it with my key that I still had. As I walk I yelled " Nikki! I'm home my love where are you?" I start looking for her
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