Re: PUT YOUR LEFT FOOT IN THE DIFFERENT RELAM..

by **Gifty** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:02 pm

Sapphire: " molly please tell me whats wrong!" i felt her trembaling. i wondered what could be wrong and what i could do about it.

by **bookcrazI** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:04 pm

Molly: I weakly lifted my arm to my chest. I tried to get her to feel it's non movingness...

by **Gifty** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:07 pm

Sapphire: I felt her hand and put mine over hers. Her chest wasnt moving. i began to make small little shrikes. No no what could i do about it?

by **bookcrazI** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:11 pm

Molly: She didn't get it. "Corseeet..." I wheesed out as loud as I could.

by **Gifty** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:13 pm

Sapphire: " ok hold on" i started tugging and riping and suddenly felt the ruff ripples of a corset. and i ripped and i gave way.

by **bookcrazI** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:14 pm

Molly: I gasped in the sweet air. I laided there and just breathed. Wonderful.

(g2g sorry..)

by **Gifty** Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:15 pm

bibi! come back soon!

by flaggirl3 Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:06 pm

Sierra: Penny drug me over to the closet. "What's your favorite color, Miss Sierra?"
"Um, yellow. Yellow," I nodded my head.
"Oh good, Miss Sierra, there is a yellow dress here!" Penny handed me the yellow dress. It had ruffled lace sleeves and a plumed out bottom with lace wrapped around it. Penny came with a corset. She put it on me, I had no problem with the corset, because where I lived there was a costume party every Halloween. So, considering my obsession with the early 1800's, I bought a dress to fit the time period for my costume, that included a corset. I was used to the tight bodice feel.

by **bookcrazI** Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:37 pm

Molly: I slowly sat up ignoring the pouding in my head. "What happened?" I asked. I slid out of the silk dress and threw the corset on the floor, all I had on was the low cut under dress thing. It was better than the dress I guess.

by **Gifty** Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:15 am

Sapphire: " you passed out because the corset was to tight." i said calmly.

by **bookcrazI** Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:48 pm

Molly: I rubbed my sore sides and whimpered. "Thats wonderful. Can you check out my bruise? I'm too scared to check." I didn't want to see if it was worse, it hurt worse. It felt worse.

by flaggirl3 Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:16 pm

Sierra: I got into the yellow dress, the lace was itchy, but it wasn't a big deal. I could live. I thanked Penny. She replied with a quick curtsy and a "You're welcome, Miss Sierra." I ran down the hall in my new high-heeled shoes and back to the Coloseum. I saw Sapphire and Molly, an undressed Molly at that, lying on the ground. "OMG! Molly! Look at your bruise!"

by **bookcrazI** Wed Aug 18, 2010 12:15 am

Molly: "Is it bad?" I winced looking at her in a bright yellow dress. "By the way I almost died from my corset and so here we are." Catching her up.

by flaggirl3 Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:41 am

Sierra: "Okay. Um, where's Rorke?" I looked around the Coloseum, no, no Rorke anywhere.

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:29 pm

(update... i was in colorado for senior trip)

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:54 pm

(rorke is in the collesium, passed out... going into third person while he is passed out)

Rorke was on the ground, not breathing, he was dehydrated. A few people came towards him. His clothes now stained brown with dirt. It took all five men to pick up Rorke, they carried him off. He was limp in their arms.

by **bookcrazI** Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:11 pm

Molly: I sat up eyes wide. "Lets go find him." I said quickly. I shakily stand in the wavy undergarmet dress and kick the over dress, corset and shoes to the side.

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:45 pm

They laid Rorke down in a banquet hall on a long wooden table. " We find him Sire." One of them said.
The king smirked, "Then you know your reward." He stood up handing them white sword.

by **bookcrazI** Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:00 pm

Molly: Before the girls could say anything I ran through a door into the banquet hall where I had come from. Seeing Rorke lying on a table I thought 'that was easy'.

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:19 pm

(back to first person)

Rorke-

I had woken up feeling like a peice of meat. I saw a guy about to murder me with a sword, and I was on a table. I was a peice of meat. I was still thirsty. "What the bloody hell is going on?" I asked my voice dry.

by **bookcrazI** Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:28 pm

Molly: I scream loudly getting all the attention positioned on me. "A MOUSE!!! HELP!!IT IS GOING TO KILL ME!!" I knew better than that but they thought I was just a girl. I loved mice infact.

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:30 pm

Rorke-

At Molly's distraction I jumped off the table, but was stopped against my will. Not again. I was still very weak I needed water. I was getting light headed.

by **bookcrazI** Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:35 pm

Molly: Not working. I start screaming and running circles..
(g2g)

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:38 pm

(bye)

Rorke-

"Where are you going?" The king asked me. "Get back on the table." With a scared look on my face, I unwillingly got on the table. "You cannot deny these men their prize. Please proceed." I was now unwillingly laying flat on the table. One of the men raised the sword above my chest.

by **bookcrazI** Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:00 pm

Molly: Damn. I sprinted toward the table and got on. I screamed. "THE MOUSE ID GOING TO GET ME!" I hugged the guy with the sword close.

by **Charlie** Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:04 pm

Rorke-

The king laughed, "Molly, would you like to say any last words to Rorke."
"Last words?" I gulped, my voice cracking a little bit.

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