Re: THE FALLEN

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:30 pm

He continued to whisper into his ear. "I hunt half creatures for profit. You just made a trade with them. By right I should kill you right now, but I'm going to ask because you seem like your good at trickery, make a distraction, while me and my tribe kill them off, and we'll even give you some of the profit."

Illias: My energy was slowly coming back to me.

Lossidian: "Kiss me?"

by **sacred at heart** Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:32 pm

Anaya: I blush "We did it once"

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:37 pm

(Hey uhm just a question. Lossidian and Anaya kissed? I think I remember it slightly, but I can't 100% it...)

Lossidian: "Anaya, you don't understand, do you?"

by **Fallen rose** Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:39 pm

corbin:" okay but if i do this instead of some of the profit i want you and your tribe to kill the girl i just traded with hyenas if they haven't kill her yet "

valiantly: they notice that i was awake and because they are tried of carrying me they tossed me to the floor drag me along with them

by **sacred at heart** Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:42 pm

(yeah they did it was like right before i mysteriously disappeared)

Anaya: "No I don't" I blush harder

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:38 am

"It's a deal." He said slowly releasing corbin.

Lossidian: "I'm a killer and nothing but. You can accept that every moment your anywhere near me, your in danger?"

Illias: I finally started to gain enough strength to get up.

by **sacred at heart** Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:42 am

Anaya: "I have been in danger all my life just this time I fell for someone who is dangerous" I whisper "I would rather be with you than without, even if I am in danger"

by **sacred at heart** Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:55 am

(g2g be back tomorrow after school)

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:06 am

(kk writing, I'm going to need a little bit to reply. But I should have replied by then Xp. Night)

by **sacred at heart** Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:44 pm

(i'm back and sorry i enjoy plot twists a bit to much)

by **Fallen rose** Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:56 pm

valianlty: werehyenas stop for a breather so when they wasn't looking i try to escape but they notice me and caught me before i could go too far and they pretty much beat the crap out of me or at least try to i gave couple of them broke ribs and noses my hands might be tied up but still i can kick hard and high

corbin;" we better catch up to the hyena before they get too far"

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:26 pm

(Lol your fine its just hard to make a nice scene without it being like weird or something. I normally plan plot changes ahead so it can look good.)

"What are you waiting for then? Your the distraction." He began to head for the treeline.

by **Fallen rose** Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:54 pm

corbin: i head for the hyena and i just whisper to myself " just for the perfect plan for hyenas " i sensed that valiantly got a little fight with hyenas

valianlty: i wipe the blood of my lips from one hyenas puching me in the mouth and i'm so going to kill corbin if no one else haven't yet

by **sacred at heart** Mon Aug 30, 2010 11:21 pm

(so you gunna respond to what I put cause like I kinda can't do anything til you do?)

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:29 am

(Alright but this'll seem like a major weird moment...)

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:45 am

Lossidian: He turned away, seemingly upset. "Was that danger trying to kill you though?" He questioned, his voice had become less confident.

by **Fallen rose** Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:33 pm

corbin: i can face to face with the group and said "Werehyenas seu só un grupo de quere ser lobo que non pode matar un coello ou desprazado nun can sen chorar sobre iso por días " i knew this would pissed off them either because they couldn't understand or they heard what i said in galician then i realized its reason 2 that they understand me when they turn to face me and one of them said "A súa carne morta serpe un"

valiantly; corbin is so stupid to said that to the werehyenas perfectly understand what corbin said in galician but this might work and i could try to escape again

(translations 1 one "werehyenas your just a group of wanna be werewolf that can't kill a bunny or shifted into a puppy dog without crying about it for days and 2 one " your dead meat snaked one ")

by **sacred at heart** Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:37 pm

Anaya: "That danger was my father, and would you try to kill me?" I ask softly

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:27 pm

Lossdian: "I don't know anymore. I used to be able to control my need to kill people, then look what I tried to do to valiantly." He turned away, face sad.

(Because he hidden right now I'm going to leave the mystery half-hunter out for a post or two.)

by **Fallen rose** Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:32 pm

(okay )

valiantly; while the hyenas are focues on corbin i ran for it and i hope i got away so i can figure out how to get this bracelet off me

corbin: i saw valiantly try to run but i stop her and used my magic to pull her back from the hyenas to fun with i didn't care who kill her just it wasn't me and she get killed

valiantly: i try to fight corbin but he was too strong for me with his magic

by **sacred at heart** Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:40 pm

Anaya: I kiss him softly "I can't lose you"

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:55 pm

An arrow fired from the treeline. It was aimed directly at valiantly and Corbin. Another arrow struck it to the ground though. The arrow that struck the other down was green though. A cloaked man came from the direction of the second arrow. Then 2 more followed him. The one in front had his bow aimed at Corbin, the other two were beginning to fire into the treeline. All of the arrow's that shot had a green glow to them. As the front one approached a symbol was cut into his arm, it was the same as Lossidian and Illias.

Lossidian: He paused, and then he looked as if he went into a trance of memories.

by **sacred at heart** Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:01 pm

Anaya: I was concerned when I say him in a trance

by **Fallen rose** Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:06 pm

corbin: i stop using my magic on valiantly at least for now as i saw a arrow was aimed at me

valiantly: i fell to the ground in relief but i knew corbin had another things in mind then just left me alone

by **Freedom_Elite** Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:19 pm

The man in front quickly looked at the men that had said they were hunters. "Figures. Thats just like Lossidian to promise not to kill someone, then send someone else to do it for him." He looked back at Corbin, "I hope you realize they were going to kill you too. They're part of Lossidian's elvish forces. Illias sent us to protect the girl, I'd suggest you leave, he's not far behind, and your at the top of his death list." He looked at the Hyena-like-creatures, "All of you should leave, but she stay's with us no matter what."

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