Re: THE FALLEN

by **Fallen rose** Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:41 pm

name: corbin
gender:male
race:gorgon like valiantly
power:has magic but not as powerful as valiantly
age:19
bio: valiantly’s cousin and a theif
appearnce:corba snake , tall, red eyes
clothing: loose black shirt and pant with combat boot

valiantly: once i got corbin's city i try to keep a low profile and used a different human look i fix my charm to give my short deep red hair instead of long black hair

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:50 pm

Illias: "Anaya are you alright?" I asked.

by **sacred at heart** Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:57 pm

Anaya: "be right back" I say stumbling a bit away grabbing my stomach. I knew this would happen from the pain and memories.

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:58 pm

Lossidian: "Will you be okay?"

Illias: "Anaya?"

by **Fallen rose** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:05 pm

valiantly: i talk corbin who was fine for me stay with him for awhile but i have to help him with a couple of jobs of his and i took his knife show my snake i gave myself a haircut i need a change really bad for some reason

by **sacred at heart** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:10 pm

Anaya: I begin to cough up everything I ate since I met Illias. I didn't even make it out of eye sight before falling to the ground

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:24 pm

Lossidian: He ran over to Anaya. "Anaya!"

Illias: At this moment I wished 1 thing and was glad for another, I wished I could walk, and I was glad my race was born without a stomach...

by **Fallen rose** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:27 pm

corbin: i walk in her room after she was finish her hair cut " who is he valiantly?"

valiantly;" what are you talking about?"

corbin:"never mind valiantly come our first job is now"

valianlty;" okay" follow corbin to the first job to help him steal whatever it is

by **sacred at heart** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:35 pm

Anaya: I continue to cough until bile came up. I rolled onto my back and sat up "Sorry you had to see that" I whispered

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:42 pm

Lossidian: "It's fine." He holds his hand out to her, "Not like it affects us."

by **Fallen rose** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:43 pm

by **sacred at heart** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:47 pm

(ok)

Anaya: I take his hand "I get like that sometimes" I whisper

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:47 pm

kk fallen

by **Freedom_Elite** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:49 pm

Lossidian: "Its fine, can you walk or do you want me to carry you?" I asked her.

by **sacred at heart** Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:53 pm

Anaya: "I can walk. You really care about me don't you?" I ask walking back to Illias

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:06 am

Lossidian: He looked down, "Yes." He tried to say it so only Anaya could hear.

Illias: I overheard what was said but I wasn't strong enough to crack jokes about it. First I had to get enough of the strength in my soul back to walk, then I could start making jokes about things.

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:10 am

(Lol this book should feel spedcial... If you look at today's top 20 posters, all of the top 5 are part of this story...)

by **Fallen rose** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:15 am

(back from getting icecream and it is special)

valiantly: as i ran from the guard that my cousin fail to notice i yell at him " your dead when we are safe"

corbin;" more run less threats" i said back to her

by **sacred at heart** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:17 am

(lol well like all of us are on all day)

Anaya: I turned putting my hands on his chest "Why?" I whispered quietly. Not realizing I was doing my flirting fae act.

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:24 am

Illias: "Cause he opened his eye's for once..." I coughed a couple times, but tried to laugh. I had to throw some joke out there.

Lossidian: He kicked me, for my joke, I coughed a little harder, but it wanted to make me laugh more. "If you don't mind ignoring the nimbskull, I don't honestly know why. But I've grown to like you." Knowing I was about to say another joke, he kicked me again. So I kept the joke to myself and only laughed.

by **Fallen rose** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:30 am

valiantly: i push corbin out of the way of the guards trap so it will catch me instead him as they drag me away i thought i was stupid to leave illias and anayay and lossidian and i quick send a message to corbin to go them for help

corbin: i started for the city my cousin friends are at for help shit i got her in trouble really bad trouble i know she going to kill me when she free

by **sacred at heart** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:34 am

Anaya: "watch this and don't get jealous" I whispered in Lossidian's ear kissing below it lightly. I go over to Illias "Oh its too bad someone isn't getting the attention he wants" I say in a flirty voice straddling Illias I kissed his neck

by **Fallen rose** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:47 am

corbin: i ran once i got to where humans are i use magic to hide my snake and quickly made my way through the crowd i when the way my cousin told me shit i hope they are still they there

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:49 am

Illias: "Not today Anaya, normally I'd play along with your murdering technique but I can't hardly move." I tried to laugh which only ended up with me coughing. "Anyways, I don't need Lossidian kicking me again cause I stole his new girlfriend." I smiled being able to target both of them in the same joke, but I ended up coughing harder then before.

by **Fallen rose** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:52 am

corbin: i got to the build that valiantly said about i took a deep breath and when in to see if they are there

by **Freedom_Elite** Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:55 am

Lossidian: Using his cloak had disappeared staying within the house which was darkened with no light because of the fire.

Illias: "Anaya." I whispered, "Be careful, someones coming."

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